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Review:Reyes91 says:
Hello, there, dude. Stopping by for your review ;)

I'm really interested in Regulus' character, and will even say that I'm somewhat writing a story where he relives things, but not in the way you're doing. I like how you're doing it, though. He has to find redemption in order to be with this girl. Now, I said this before on another story, but I'm not one to read stories where Regulus is in a relationship. He's the one character where I never cared for to be in a romantic relationship with someone. It's a bit harsh, but it's how I always felt. Still, with my feelings aside, this is still interesting. I liked how you had them meet first when he was younger. It's the start of it all, and shows why this girl would be interested in the two brothers in the first place.

Good work with this. It's definitely interesting. I would have liked more description in the beginning about how he dealt with the Inferi grabbing him and forcing him down. Maybe even a bit more description on how it felt like to drown. Of course, none of us probably knows how it truly feels (I hope none of us don't), but trying to add more length to the beginning may help. Just random suggestions since I honestly don't have much critique to give out.

-Reyes91

Author's Response: Hi hi :)

There were so many approaches that could've been made on Regulus' story.. I just happened to be feeling 'love' at the moment I began work on this! :P But I know what you mean, I like reading stories on Regulus with no other relationship but with Sirius and his family and Voldemort :)

I didn't actually think of that when I wrote the first chapter. But I do see how that would add to the story! Hehe, thank you for your suggestions!

And thank you lots for reviewing! :) I really appreciate it. It made me all happy and stuff :$


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