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Review:Ginny45 says:
Hey again :)
Ooh things have started to get interesting.
As I have said, flow, punctuation,spelling all great.

Again you re-writing if really good, I never read the original , i don't think. So I can't compare but it is going really well. Is it compleated? If it is I'll just zoom straight through these instead of you coming back to the thread every so often. :)

I still love your characterisation, every so often I see one line and I'm like that is why I adore this story. You have the Marauders spot on. :) Especiallt Peter, I just noticed this in this chapter but he is really well done.

Great Chapter :)


Author's Response: Hey, thanks for coming by. :D

Yes, the re-write is all completed. That would be awesome, thank you so much!

I happen to be one of the guilty ones who has a habit of forgetting Peter off to the side and turning him into a lump, so thank you for that! I really made an effort with him in this story, albeit he's not a huge part, but he's there. Lol.

Thank you again. :D --Jenna

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