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Review:orangezauber says:
It was a good chapter. However, it was a bit chaotic. I don't mean to sound so blunt, but I was having a hard time following where things were going. There didn't seem to be any change in time. One minute Remus finds Haley and Jake shagging in the boy's dorm the next minute they are in a broom closet. Same goes with the whole Hope and Amy part. Hope gave Amy 24 hours to decide, but I felt as though there was no time between. The threat was made and then Amy is punching Hope the next day?

You have a great flow with this story and I really like your writing style, but this chapter was lacking a bit. I appologize again for being so blunt.

I really like the content of this chapter. I would also really like if you expanded upon it in the next couple of chapters. You don't have to have one single exciting activity per chapter. There are some great things going on in the story. I really appreciate you writing this story and I can't wait to read more. Thanks for posting.

Always,
orangezauber

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Don't be so sorry about your feedback, if nobody says anything I'm never going to learn. Something I'll bear in mind in the future is not trying to cram so much stuff in. The problem is a lot of chapters seem to drag and then others have too much in. It was a crazy chapter and I'm you like what's happening, even if I kinda screwed up with the layout :) HP

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