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Review:Hermione_Malfoy_ says:
Ah, by far the best chapter so far. I mean... wow. Seriously I knew the story was good, but this just made it amazing. When most people add a new element to a story in fanfiction, like the infertility stone, it sounds to far fetched and has a stupid title. You adding in the infertility stone was really good. It was just great.

I absolutely love seeing Draco changing. I like that you don't get to much into his head so when he does something out of the ordinary it makes you wonder, what's really going through his head? Ah, but then again I'm just a sucker for a sweet Draco(:

I like that you have detail but not to much. Like "When they finished, they cast a sweeping spell to detect any lingering pieces." Most people would have had an epic way-to-into-depth paragraph about the miniscule shards of glass lodged into the fibrous, lavish carpet.

Your sentence structure is really good and your dialogue is done really well. I especially loved Tonks line in the end. I definitly can't wait for the next chapter. Do update soon(:

Hermione Malfoy

Author's Response: haha gosh that was one hell of a review thank you so much :-) You just motivated me to get on with the next chapter finally lol thanks! I'll update soon

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