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Review:Jenna822 says:
Hello! Here with your review. So glad you came by because I absolutely love Regulus!

Okay, I normally review as I go, but I got pretty caught up in the chapter, so I didn't stop to comment. Canon business aside, I love your concept. The whole remorse/mind journey thing is a good idea. A few grammar problems here and there, but nothing too drastic as to put me off. I like the way you portrayed the young Regulus and Sirius, though I don't understand why Sirius wouldn't know what ice cream is. They are wizards, but wizards have ice cream. I mean, there's even Florean Fortescue's ice cream shop. Anyways, moving on from that. Altogether, I think the only real problem you have is the Author Note. To be completely honest, it kinda sounds snarky and even a little pompous. Not saying that you ARE, that is just how it comes off to me. Seeing as you have written more of the story, I would suggest removing it. Sorry such a short review, but there wasn't any real issues that I could pick out. If the rest is as good as this, then you're all set. :D --Jenna

Author's Response: Hello!

I saw the Blacks as people who didn't normally go to Diagon Alley since they thought they were above other wizards/witches. And because he was so young at the time, they didn't really have any reason to go. Saying that, he had no idea what sweets and stuff are. So I hope that cleared that up! :D

Are you talking about the early AN's? Haha, I posted them quite a while ago, and I've forgotten all about them :P

Thank you for reviewing! I really appreciate it!


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