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Review:Kerichi says:
It's taking some getting use to, Draco calling Andromeda "Aunt Andie", especially to Hermione and Harry. Calling Teddy a half-breed pup seems as worthy of a hex as Cissy calling her sister's recently deceased child a freak.

I agree with Hermione, I'd want Andie to take care of me if I was sick. :) It's no wonder Snape is attracted.

I do wonder if he would've really said "Those poor kids. They followed Potter to the very end." I could more easily imagine him saying "Those poor dunderheads."

I noticed a lot of "coffee talk" in this chapter. Draco telling Severus all about his aunt. It serves the plot and gives the reader information, but would a teenage boy and a grown man really have that conversation, with Draco recalling all that detail?

Author's Response: You're right about the "poor dunderheads." He hasn't gotten those memories back, yet, and perhaps without them, he's not quite in the frame of mind he would be?

The coffee talk is probably a little contrived with Draco. I do suspect that they're used to talking once in a while. In book six both act as if a certain rapport is now gone, but you're right, they might not talk about it quite that way. That's something for me to think about, for sure as I frame future situations.

It is no wonder Snape's attracted, but likewise, it's no wonder that Andromeda doesn't believe his motivations.

Thanks for the review!

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