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Review:rey says:
Tehe, this is really funny! I especially liked Lily's: "...when you date one of us you date all of us."
I can so picture that scene happening for real.
And I like the concept of this story.
Usually, it's about a girl and James and how they got together. But you're actually writing about their relationship. I LOVE that. 'Cause, really, it's all sweet before you begin dating someone with such a huge family. But I think that's when the real isuess begin. :D And you captured it so nicely.
So, as you can tell, me like this very much, hehe. :D
Just keep on going. ;)
P. S. You do have some grammar errors but, personally, it doesn't bother me.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so very much for the review I'm so glad that you liked it and found it funny. Yeah, I wanted to portay how James' girlfriend would feel being sucked into the wotter family and dealing with the pro's and con's that come with it. I'm so sorry about the grammar, I will try to do better next time. Keep reading!!! :-)

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