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Review:Akussa says:
Well, the idea is great, the characterization is good but the pacing is a bit too fast and hard to follow. As if small paragraphs were missing at places that would slowdown the action.
Other than that, I noticed a small erm, I don't know the english word for it but, let's just say that Cell phones were not very common or, you know, invented back in the 70s!

Still, you captured my attention and I am going straight to ready the next chapters!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Sorry if the spacing was hard to follow, I will work on that. As for the cell phone thing, maybe the Evans were rich, I don't know. I guess I forgot that this was a generation ago! Thanks for the advice!

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