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Review:thehyacinthgirl says:
Ah, why do you worry so much? This chapter was absolutely wonderful as were the rest of them.

This chapter was charming and descriptive, and I really didn't mind that it was about Freddy. It added some flavor to it, I think, that it would rather lack if it had simply been the ending excerpt of Dominique and Scorpius.

I think the plot is developing more and more with each chapter even if you won't recognize this fact. ^_~

I'm not sure what I feel about any of Dom's friend's really, so I'm not sure how to feel about Valentina. At the moment I'm torn between admiration and amusement. I'll let you know if that changes.

The whole Hugo and Odette mini-plot is indeed amusing. I can't imagine what she'd see in Hugo if he's really as bad as Dom makes him out to be, but maybe there's more to him than meets the eye.

I can't wait for the characterizations to continue to build. I can't imagine how exciting the next chapter will be. Ha ha, I can't wait to see Bill's reaction. I imagine that Louis is going to be a right prat, though.

I really think you're doing a splendid job with this, and I really have no suggestions for improvement or criticisms.

Your spelling and grammar were impeccable, and as I've already mentioned your descriptions were wonderful as were your transitions.

Great job!

♥
Linders

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