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Review:Jenna822 says: after about ten minutes of staring at the screen with a shocked expression, I can review. I can't breath, but I can type. Where to start? Okay, so I came to your page because your challenge got me thinking you'd have slash, and you do, and I almost squealed at seeing a Remus/Sirius (okay, I did squeal and MSNed a friend).

So the set up was genius. It was drawn out enough to be detailed (which I love) but not so long that it lost my interest. Your description of Remus' feelings and doubts was spot on to real. I love that he takes focus. I loved everything right up until Snape appeared. Cuz like, I hate Snape, so much! Everything about Snape makes me wanna cry/gag and you brought him in to ruin such a wonderful Remus/Sirius moment. *tear flick*

So, naturally this gets a favorite mark and I'll be following it. I gotta know what happens!! One thing I wanted to point out, you typed "The Sirius" once. Let me show you.

=The Sirius did not look convinced, and even worse took the golden moment to investigate himself.=

Just thought I'd tell ya. :D Anyways, wonderful chapter and I eagerly await the next. :D --Jenna

Author's Response: Aww, thanks for the review! This actually was not supposed to turn out anything like it did, but my brain, the eternal angst administrator, went, hey! Let's torture Remus because it's fun! So I did xD I'll try to get the next chapter up and written some time within the next week or so :)

Ohh *facepalm* Thanks! Too many 'the boy', 'the Gryffindor', 'the animagus' things running around my head :P

-- Jess

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