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Review:redherring says:
I do love a bit of Theodore/Draco, mainly because we pretty much know nothing about Nott and so who's to say he wasn't madly in love with Draco? Haha :D This was great, though - the plot was so simple, but you pulled it off brilliantly and made it completely your own, and the writing was to die for.

I loved this: He practised it when he was alone, letting the words roll off his tongue like anchors, lead weights. Practising pronunciation, emphasis, crafting elaborate sentences, exquisite prose, and then discarding them, shedding adjectives and adverbs until all he had were two pronouns, a verb, and a name.

Your characterisations of both Theodore and Draco were excellent, I thought - Theodore was both normal teenage boy and son of a Death Eater, and Draco was wonderfully true to canon. I also liked the inclusion of Tracey - she is canon, isn't she? I can't quite remember.

Anyway, just fantastic! I really enjoyed it :)

Author's Response: Theodore Nott is basically just a huge babe of a character, and, yeah, what is to say he wasn't madly in love with Draco? A bit of slash here and there does no harm (:

Thank you very much! Ahha, I write Draco so much and so badly that I'm convinced if I just went through all my stories involving him and just changed his name to 'Gilbert' or something everyone would think I just had this vaguely racist OC called Gilbert. So it's good to hear he worked well here (:

Tracey Davis is canon to the extent she was on JKR's original classlist. Another favourite of mine (:

Thank you very much for the review!

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