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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! This is a very nicely written oneshot. I think you could have given a few flashbacks about Hugo about why on earth he was in Romania- because most of the latter half is about poor Rose's death, it just seems to me that the only reason that he is there is so Charlie can make the transition to the flashbacks easier with some clever dragon knowledge. I do like this though, it's a clever little piece, and very well written :) Feel free to re-request with any of your other works.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Yea I totally see your point about the flashbacks, I wrote this in a burst of writing after a drought of a few months so I was reluctant to change anything about it. It wasn't until I had it up that I saw that it might seem a little fanciful of Hugo, because for me I had the whole reason in my head.
I'll probably go back at some stage and edit this with more detail but just for now I'm going to leave it.
Thanks so much again and I'm so happy you thought it was well-written :)
- Galawen xx

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