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Review:spreaddapoo93 says:
Wow... My golly, this is... BRILLIANT! Well... other than the fact that it's Ancient Egypt (a subject I've LOVED since fourth grade), it's completely tangible! I am mesmerised by the cohesion of each bit of fact and fiction (merged so well, I can't differentiate between the two) and... just WOW.
Awesome work!!! Can't wait to see what's next.

(P.S. I think there is one typo: (third paragraph)
"A bitter sigh escaped, Ankhesenamun, queen of Egypt,"
The first comma shouldn't be there. It should be:
A bitter sigh escaped Ankhesenamun, queen of Egypt,)

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing this story! And doubly thank you for pointing out that typo - me and commas didn't used to get along. ;)

Wow, what compliments! It's great to find someone who loves Ancient Egyptian history so much - I first learned about it in fourth grade as well, and it's a love that's stayed with me all these years since. :D I hope that you enjoy the rest of the story as well!

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