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Review:Danceinggirl109 says:
The OC is good but I feel like the first two chapters were shallow and didn't really get into her background and feelings. The third chapter was better because you started to get into her feelings about how Regulus was treating her.

The plot is pretty good so far and the third chapter really starts to develop it. I can't wait for more, keep on writing because the story is getting really good now! :D

~Danceinggirl109

Author's Response: You do have a point there, the real background of her is coming in chapter five and the ending of chapter four will reveal as to why that is.

Thank you so much for your lovely review!

x Ely


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