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Review:Akussa says:
Very Interesting story you wrote there. I'm not really informed about your work but, is this part of a bidder idea? (other one-shots, novels...) I thing you've created a world and character that give you a lot of juice and you could write many more interesting stories with them. (might be rambling though, I'll go check what else you wrote before going on!)
You have a great writting style; particularily when it comes to describing the emotions and thoughts of your characters; it feels like we are right there, in their heads.
Again, very original and creative; keep writting!

Author's Response: Yep, this is a companion piece for my Novel; All is NOT Fair in Love & War, and it takes place right after Chapter 5. I have another one-shot up that's about Saleena too; Perfect. But it takes place when she is younger tho, and Sirius is in it! :)

I'm glad you liked my work tho, thank you!! I am actually considering doing a Novella about Saleena & the Gypsies after I finish "All is NOT Fair in Love & War". If I do do that, it won't be for a while tho... Emotion is one thing I always strive to get across when I'm writing a story, so I especially want to thank you for pointing that out!!

Thanks so much for the review! Feel free to check out the other 2 stories too, if you have some free time and can;t find anything to read! It would be nice to hear more of your thoughts!! :)

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