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Review:harrylilyjames says:

There were a good amount of grammatical mistakes, and some of the sentences didn't flow right with one another. Just a little read over and you'll catch them.:)

Also, it could do with a little bit more description, just to slow down the pace in the story in some parts.

But I like what you were getting across, it was extremely sweet, I felt so sorry for the two of them. :(

[-yep, im warming up to hermione/harry as a couple =D]

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! This is one of my older stories that I wrote maybe as a freshman or i might have really been an eighth grader. I'm not too horribly shocked that there are mistakes. I will definitely try to get around to editing this someday. It took be quite a while before I do though. :-/
I am glad you enjoyed the story. It was one heck of an idea that i went of off. It did turn out good though so I am happy.

~Good you should really just read all my stuff until You just adore them. I'm pretty sure my stories may be able to do that to you. When you actually find someone else's that are Harmony don't loose them. Most people hate writing hermione unless to bash her. So when you find someone that is good with the couple, definitely read all their stories (and remember REVIEW!!)

Thank you for the review once again. It is extremely appreciated.

Am. Ginny

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