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Review:Snapegirl says:
Poor Gabe! He lost both his wife and child. No wonder he wanted to get away from there. It's understandable. And I recognize the ceremony he does from my own research into Native American customs. I loved the way the dogs interacted with the little girl. So many big dogs are just like that, they love kids are a lot like big plush toys, you can hug them to death, rip their fur out and they won't mind.

The bit with the dogs almost drinking wine was funny too. I knew a dog once who drank beer!

Hmm . . .so Bella is eyeing him. Her parents would KILL her if she took up with him, though actually I'm more afraid for Gabe if she does. She could easily break his heart . . .even if it's already broken . . .again. Because she's selfish and he doesn't seem like that at all. That kind of girl's always trouble for a guy.

Looking forward to the next one! 10/10

Author's Response: Yes, poor Gabe had many reasons to leave home, but did he have to travel so far? I remember your stories with Native rituals. I plan my story to be a sort of melding of Native beliefs and the wizarding world. When you think about it, each could be a good influence on the other. The scene of Jacob and the little girl is based on a true story. I was once sitting outside of a coffee shop with my St. Bernard and a little girl came along who was usually afraid of dogs. Her parents couldn't believe she wasn't scared and took a few pictures of her hugging the dog. My Golden Retriever, Edward, used to love beer. We had to be careful not to spill any when he was around. He'd run over and lap it up:D I'm also worried about Gabe but if anyone can handle Bella, he can. He's a true warrior. He may be hurt but has his Native beliefs to pull him through. I've mentioned before that this story will make you laugh and cry before it's over. A lot of it's based on real situations. I just submitted the third chapter for validation. If we're lucky, we'll see it early next week. Thanks so much for the review and I'll see you next time, in my story or one of yours.

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