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Review:ob sessed says:
Wow!! I'm here with your review, but wow!
Let me begin this review then :)... I love the concept, it's original and different. I love this chapter and how you've portrayed everyone. The story seemed to flow rather well and your portrayal of the Deatheaters, Lucius, Voldemort, well just all of them were pretty spot on. Your descriptions weren't overdone and were straightforward enough to give the readers a good image of the scene. I thought the plot seemed to present itself quite clearly in this chapter and so I commend you on that. Sometimes, it's really hard to get a plot across without just going 'okay so here it is...'

Erm, okay criticisms... there weren't really anything. However, there were a few awkward sentences that I think a good read through would help clear out. I also think the italics in this chapter is unnecessary, especially because you've already put at the top "September 24th - Sixteen Years Ago"... but I think that's just a preference thing so it is up to you as the author. Erm, really though, I thought this was a great beginning chapter and I really enjoyed reading it. I'm actually excited to know what happens with Draco and Melody so please rerequest once you've got Chapter 2 up :P Great job! x

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much for the long review. I'm glad you liked it. This is actually the best review I have ever gotten. I plan to rerequest

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