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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
Now I feel even worse for Freddy. No matter that she's getting better and starting research again, she's going to miss the Tri-Wizard Tournament. I'd forgotten for a bit that this was taking place between PoA and GoF, having gotten lost in the characters and the atmosphere, but it'll be interesting to see how you integrate GoF with this story, and also how Remus will come into things. I can't remember what he did between PoA and OotP.

I really like Oliver, more than I did in Consumed. He's just so nice, and he's also very realistic in his speech and behaviour. His presence poses a great contrast between himself and Crane, who is so intense and almost unreal in his aura - superhuman is the word I'm looking for.

It was a very good chapter, and you know what? There weren't any typos or anything to that matter in this chapter - I didn't notice any at least (which could mean that I was too consumed in the story to actually see them :P). It was fantastic to see that you'd updated - I'd been waiting since the review fest for more - because it's just a wonderful story to read. ^_^

Author's Response: Hiya Susan!
First off, I'm so sorry it took me forever to respond to this review. October was just crazy for me and I'm still recovering from the icky appendix surgery. And I really didn't want to leave you a lame "thank you" for this review, because you know I just adore your feedback and I have to squee endlessly over your comments. ;)

I'm actually kind of glad you forgot that this story takes place between POA and GOF, which sounds strange, I know. I think, however, being in a sanatorium or a place of convalescence somewhat removes the patient from the world at large. And even though she desperately wants to go back to teaching, Freddy has definitely fallen out of the loop quite a bit and I think it would take some time for her to get used to the real world again, as it were.

And I'm so glad that you like Oliver. I think his more congenial appearance in this story has to do with Freddy's own opinion of him. She's somewhat less defensive towards him than she was in 'Consumed' and now that he's engaged to be married, I think she feels less threatened by him...as opposed to Crane.

Wow, no typos? Yay!!! *does a happy dance* I must have lucked out somehow. ^_^

Thanks so much for the unbelievably amazing review! As always, it was wonderful hearing from you. I hope you're well! Take care!

Best,
Lee Anne

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