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Review:butterbeergal says:

This was fantastic, Kate! A classic, well-written James/Lily piece. I thought the second half, in particular, was absolutely lovely.

Your characterization of Lily was spot on. Though I was a bit agitated with her at the beginning because of all the hatred she was feeling (though I can't really blame her :P), I loved how you wrote her when she was trying to figure James out. Her thoughts were exactly what J.K.'s Lily would have thought (well, at least for me), and when she suddenly reached the realization that she liked James... wow. I was just all smiles.

The scene in the Heads' Common Room made me MELT into an incoherent puddle.

"James Potter, if you break my heart, your life will not be worth living."
^Hahaha I can imagine her saying that!

James was adorable, too. At the beginning, I could definitely see why Lily was thoroughly annoyed with him, what with his arrogance and all, but when he finally explained why he teased her so much, I believed him 100%.

And Sirius, while only appearing briefly, was pure ♥.

Brilliant piece! I absolutely loved reading it.

xx Gill

Author's Response: Gill!!
hey darling and thanks so much for a wonderful review! this was my first and only lily/james piece so i am really pleased you liked it! i haven't been able to write them since!

im glad you liked the characterisation and WOW what an incredible compliment!! im happy it worked - james' reasoning. i was a little unsure when i first posted this, thinking it might come off as cliched but then i thought, well, it's a very boy thing, lol, teasing the girl they like!

i love sirius ^_-

thank you so much hun!!
xx Kate

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