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Review:Akussa says:
This was a very cute little story. The way you describe the scene is beautiful; I felt like I could almost picture it.
One thing bothered me though; you have a lot of spelling mistakes in there (just in the first paragraph I saw "there" when it should be "their wedding"; "trew" instead of "through"...) and some typos too (ofocourse). Maybe you should think of getting a beta to help you find them? It's distracting the reader from the quality of your writting.. ok, it distracted me, I don't know for the others!
oh and Fred was there? For some reason, the fact that everything else was cannon, this little piece of info caught my attention (not in a bad way, I was just happy to see him there even though he shouldn't be).
All in all, it's a nice story; too nice to have spelling mistakes take away the reader's pleasure of reading it.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you liked it. I'm working on getting a Beta Reader. Your review is the kindest one I have gotten on this one-shot, everyone says its horrible. But I'm glad you enjoyed it and I will defiantly fix the spelling errors!

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