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Review:thehyacinthgirl says:
Generally, I hate anything that isn't Victoire/Teddy (because I love them so and I hate it when they're not together) but this was beautiful.

It is rare that I like anything that isn't Vic/Ted so kudos to you! :P Though, I must say I think this would have been Victoire and Teddy. Although, I would say that I have a clear bias. Ha ha!

This was absolutely magnificent as was.

The emotions, the descriptions, and the story in itself was so gorgeous and cheerful despite the fact that she turned him down twice.

I loved your characterizations of both of them. It seemed a fresh take on the both of them, and I love that you used Roxanne . . . simply because most people seem to forget about her or make her the annoying and obnoxious cousin in the background.

I particularly loved the closing lines and how you described her garden and spring. Though, all of it was lovely.

I usually like longer pieces, too, but this seemed exactly the right length for this piece.

Well done!


Author's Response: Oh, believe me, I generally hate everything that's not Ted/Victoire as well, but it was a challenge! The pairing is generally not my prime choice for Ted, but I worked with what I got. :)

In any case, I'm really glad you liked it! After 0 reviews for a couple of days, I was worried about how it was being read and received, so this review has definitely calmed my spirits. Thank you!

Roxanne! I was uneasy around her. I haven't read much of her at all, so I pretty much just used a clear slate and created my own. I'm so glad you liked her!

By the way, the username is lovely. :)

Thanks again! I can't tell you how much this means to me.

- Rin

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