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Review:moonbaby11 says:
Wow. This story is really great, even though I'm only on the 2nd chapter! Aw, Arthur's so sweet, letting Molly go like that, even though he fancied her AND he was under the love potion. So nice! :) he's got a nice character going on. ;)

I liked how this chapter sparked the beginning of the Arthur/Molly pairing and showed how Molly felt about him. I'm really loving this. It's such an original and unique idea! Can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: I actually want to go back and re-write the early chapters. I originally intended this story to be a short story, and end at their first kiss (sort of) but then it turned into a novel with a rather disjointed plot. I think the sequel is better, it's a little more cohesive. However, I'm still quite fond of this story, so no rewriting yet.

I remain, to date, the only person on this archive to ever write a complete novel entirely based on the Molly/Arthur pairing. I wonder what that says about me haha... Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm glad you liked it :)

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