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Review:TenthWeasleyWriter says:
Hello! I'm from the forums with your requested review. (:

The Good: This is one of the most original plots I have ever seen, on HPFF or elsewhere! I have never read a Bertie fic before and I enjoyed it much more than I thought I would. Your 'inspiration flashes' are to be envied! I loved that Myrtle got to live and that she married Bertie - sososo cute!

The Critiques: You were concerned about changing Myrtle's and Bertie's characters halfway through the story. I thought you stayed very true to Bertie as you wrote him throughout; however, I do see this in Myrtle once you brought it up, although I don't know if I would have caught it otherwise. She seems a bit mroe docile and feminine in the second half of the story... I always gathered Myrtle to be a bit more of a pessimist. However, I like her docility, so if it bothers you enough to change it I'd suggest changing first half-Myrtle. (: Plot, grammar, and spelling were top-notch!

Author's Response: My inspiration flashes rarely work out like this, usually they don't make it through to a completed story. I'm pleased with this one though!

For the characters changing, I was worried about Bertie going from class clown to deep thinker, but it sounds like I patched up the beginning enough to make him work. I was definitely worried about Myrtle going from sobbing girl to quiet and in awe of everything. I'll probably try to average the two together, because I want some of the sobbing Myrtle to shine out so that she's familiar. Thanks for the helpful review!

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