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Review:Hyenni says:
"When she wakes up in the dormitory in the blackness of the night, covered in sweat and her heart beating unsteadily against her chest, she will still, (shhh...), check her hands before going back to sleep.

Sometimes they remain red for quite a while, but if she just keeps on staring at them eventually they’ll turn back to the normal colour and she can sleep again. "

Those two paragraphs just blew me away.

Okay, this WHOLE PIECE blew my mind. Entirely. I seriously can't believe how moved I was by it, how perfectly it was written. I can totally see how much work you put into it, and my God, has it worked out. If I was ever able to write something like this, I would be in heaven right now :P

This is the first Harry/Luna I've ever read, and while I don't think I'll be pursuing it, it was without a doubt so real and so tangible and so...so perfect that I'd rather not read another Harry/Luna. I don't think it could live up to this.

The repetition of the 'If I die' bit was brilliant - I can't put into words how or why it was brilliant, it just WORKED. It kept the piece moving, it gave them depth, showed their characters more clearly.

Absolutely, mind-blowingly, phenomenally incredible.

10/10, favourited (obviously). ^^

Author's Response: Thank you. Thank you so much! I've had a lot of critiscm for this oneshot and I didn't know if people would get it or if they would even like it. I'm glad at least some liked it hahah. I'm not really a Luna/Harry girl at all, but this one just haunted me until I had written it all :) Thank you so much for that wonderful review, know that this truly made my day :) THANK YOU .

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