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Review:DarkLadyofSlytherin says:
So for a really long time I've planned to read something of yours, and finally I decided which fic to start with.

I really like the beginning here. Though, to be honest, it made me think of The Mummy movies more so than Prince of Persia. Especially since the main character in this chapter is Ankhesenamun, which I believe was the same woman in both The Mummy and the Mummy Returns who had fallen in love with Imotep.

Granted, even with the slight similarities between this and the movies, I really enjoyed your prologue. I like that she was really in love with Tutankhamen, that she would never really love anyone other than him. It was bittersweet, really. I don't know what is fact or fiction in terms of this chapter, but I like it all the same.

I'm looking forward to reading more of it as I have time.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for taking a gander at this story! It's one that I've been working on for so long now, and it's always wonderful to hear people's thoughts on it, even though this prologue has a lot less to do with the main plot as it originally did five years ago. I guess that's the problem with taking so long to write a story. XD

Anyway, "The Mummy" is definitely an influence on this story. It came out at just the right time in my life, and I think I've seen it at least ten times by now. It's such a fun movie, and the sequels never caught my admiration as much as the first did. However, Ankhesenamun is a real historical character - the young wife of Tutankhamun, and I think a relative of his too. She's definitely not the same girl as in the movie. ;)

It would be very nice to hear your further thoughts on this story, if you're interested in continuing, of course. Thank you again for reading and reviewing this first chapter. :)

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