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Review:Potter_Princessx3 says:
Hello! Autumn here from the forums with your review.

I really liked this Prolouge, so much so I'm adding this to my favorites!

You wrote it great. But you wanted a review on "flow and characters." So, heres what I have to say:

I really loved the way you described each of the girls. I can really get a clear picture of how they look and there personailtes. (even though there names are hard to pronouce) They are all so differnt from one another. I wonder how that will play in with plot...hmm... can't wait to see what happens next.

As for the flow of this prologue, I found it was pretty good in my opinion. Even though you jumped from one girl to the next. But hey. your introducing them in clever way!

I will most defiantly continue to read on. I can't wait to see what happens next, and I hope you liked my review!

Thanks for requesting! (:

~Autumn
{8/10}

Author's Response: Hello Autumn!

Well thank you so much. I have a bit of an obsession with describing my characters in absolute detail. Thank you so much for your lovely review and I'll try and get the next chapter up soon.

Thanks for filling my request!

x Ely


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