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Review:orangezauber says:
I know I already reviewed today, but I must continue my praises to you. I just can't get enough of how you describe people, rooms, feelings...it's just...wow!

A possible editing thing may be done in the third paragraph of this chapter. You talk about Addie's inability to perform higher levels of magic after a transfomation. You end up using the word magic five times in two sentences. I don't want you to feel that you have to change this, but maybe cut down on the number of times that word is used in the paragraph. It got to be a bit repetitive sounding. However, I did like how you explained how Addie felt after the transformation and how magically weak she felt.

Now for your questions...I am sure others have answered these for you, but I will too just so I can feel helpful. I do believe that Dumpledore does know about the Room of Requirement because he made reference to it once being a bathroom in the middle of the night when he was talking to Harry in the First book. As for the prefect question...I am not sure, but to me it makes sense to have a replacement prefect if someone becomes head boy/girl.

Well, there is another long review for you to read. I didn't mean to leave two reviews, but I was just so extatic when I saw that you had posted more chapters that I really couldn't stop reading. I look forward to another great chapter!

As Always,
orangezauber

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