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Review:moonbaby11 says:
Oh, this was hilarious! I loved all the cliches that you managed to fit into this one chapter! I loved how pratically everytime that James mentioned Lily, he called her a different pet name. Lily Flower, Lady Love, Lily Sunrose etc. I see that all the time in Marauders fics so I liked hwo you incorperted that.

Oh, I literally goraned out loud when the transfer student came. SO CLICHE! I'm assuming Sirius is going to fall for her and that the girl Remus likes is actually a werewolf? Maybe?

Dumbledore was so OOC, but was absolutley hilarious! He reminded me so much of Dumbledore form A Very Potter Musical. I liked the bit about how the 5th Years and belwo woudl never get to attend a Yule Ball. That was funny.

The bit about Peter was really good, because he's always ignored in Marauders stories. I actually think that he had a good amount of lines/mentions in this, compared to what most people do with Peter!

Overall, I thought this was really good. It was so cliche there were points where I was thinking, 'Wow, I've never seen THAT before' *rolls eyes* I thin it must be really hard to write all these horrible cliches and still have a good story with good writing to it! Great job! I'd love to review your next chapter when it's up! Just stop by my review thread again!

Author's Response: Hey there!

First off, let me apologize on how increadibly long it's taken for me to respond to this review. I had absolutly NO IDEA how busy college life would be

I'm so glad you likllthe nicknames! And of couse, can't have a cliche without a transfer student, cant you? :P

Yepp, Dumbledore was pretty much as OOC as possible. :P Then again, I think every character was as OOC as possible...haha

Thanks again for the lovely review and all the praises! :D And once again, sorry about the responding time!

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