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Review:moonbaby11 says:
This was a really cute one-shot! Poor Lucy! I really felt bad for her by the end of the story. :(

I liked the idea you had for this. I hate it when my nose itches and I can't scratch it! I liked how oyu used that idea and made a story out of it! It was really interesting!

Your flow was good and the story didn't seem to go to fast or too slow. The sentences seemed to go together, and I especially enjoyed the last sentence! A crybaby AND a nosepicker would be horrible for oyur first week of school!

I thought that you captured the thoughts of an 11 year old really well! Lucy just seemed so young and innocent and full of dreams about becoming Head Girl, which I really liked! You did really well with her!

Overall, I thought this was a really great idea and an interesting story. Great job! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it, I was worried that it wouldn't go over well because it is a rather strange idea and all, but that doesn't seem to be the case. But anyways, I'm glad that the flow was on and that she seemed to be behaving right for an eleven year old, it was hard to write someone so immature!

This review was really helpful, I've been a little unsure about this, so thank you!


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