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Review:liza_potter says:
Considering how little we actually know of Lisa Turpin, I think you did a good job. I could see you had fun with her backstory- her parents leaving her on the side of the road at age three? How terrible. Though surviving a week without water and food would be nearly impossible. I'm sure a little three year old girl at the side of the road would be noticed earlier as well. But that's just my opinion. :)

It's interesting how she didn't take part in the Final Battle. She didn't turn out to be some sort of hero. I liked her process of thought- did her actions really make her a selfish coward? It's an intriguing topic to think about.

Your grammer was quite good, but one thing that jumped at me was "Madam Pompfrey". It's actually "Pomfrey". Sorry, I'm a terrible nit picker. ^_^

Overall, however, I think this was a great one-shot. One that someone makes wonder, really. Thank you so very much for entering my challenge!

-Liza

Author's Response: Thank you. Indeed I did.

Thought it would be something different to what J.K wrote for us and have someone who wasn't some big hero.

Thank you so much for creating your challenge.

x Ely


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