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Review:Cal585 says:
Hey Tinny,
I've gotta say, it's not a half bad story you've got here. Glad to see Remus getting a bit of character development as I often feel he is pushed out of Marauder fics by James and Sirius who take up all the limelight. And I did enjoy the Levifold reference. It's been a while since I read that book.
Anyway, anticipating the next chapter!

Author's Response: Cal! ^_^

Finally, eh? Haha. I'm so happy that you think this isn't rubbish. This is my first attempt at writing fanfiction and I was a little nervous on how I'd be able to pull this off (still am, actually :P) but your kind comments really made my day! Woo! I think you're the first guy to review this story actually, so congratulations! And I'm glad you didn't cringe with all the girly drama. Or did you? *eyes narrow* :P

Ahhh. Remus. As I was writing this, I did want Remus and Peter (and Snape, for that matter, but he won't be on until the later chapters) to have exposure as well, because, as you said, a lot of the Marauder stories out there tend to leave these characters out - something that I'm not really comfortable with, you know? As much as possible, I want this story to stick to canon, and to leave out those two just because they are not as glamorous would just be silly. And I'm happy to see that you noticed my effort to include Remus on this. Thank you, Cal!

I must say, I haven't heard of that book you were referring to. Haha. The Lethifolds that were mentioned on this chapter were actually creatures that I read from Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them. The descriptions I included, the digesting the body etc., were taken from the book too. I was just so fascinated with them that I had to include them here. Maybe you could tell me more about that book you were talking about? It sounds interesting.

Anticipating the next chapter? Woo! I'll try my best not to disappoint.

Thank you, Cal! You really made me smile! I'll see you around, my friend! ^_^

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