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Review:Meg_ says:
THIS HAS BEEN SO FREAKING LONG!

Now with that said, even though it was incredibly short, I loved the chapter. That last paragraph in particular was incredibly poetic. The moving back and forth between the scenes was great too. Very movie like. I do have a problem with this spacing situation though. Your chapters are so good writing wise but then you have these huge spaces in between each paragraph and sentence. Do you use simple editor when you post your story?

Plotwise I'm loving it. Please do not go for so long without updating. It's killing me!
~Meg

Author's Response: I know! I feel such guilt! I'm trying to do it but my organized chaos system isn't working.
I'm glad you liked it. I especially had a soft spot for this chapter. It is one of my favourites. The last paragraph I think I changed four times, but I'm happy you liked the final product. Thank you!

I don't know why there are gaps, when I see the preview it looks perfectly ok. I will try and rectify it.

Thank you! It's a pleasure to receive continuous feedback from such a great writer
Thank you


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