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Review:littlemissmb says:
this is better done as it has more detail ( =] ) but you still need to work on slowing down the plotline.this is the kind of true love that i didnt see in the snake and the rabbit. i think it was very cute and touching but again you need to slow down the plot, add more content..

keep up the good work like this and youll end up getting there
8/10

Author's Response: Thank you very much...I am better at detail then plot but I will work on it and i will revise it and the snake and rabbit!

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