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Review:dramione_girl82 says:
*Giggles Profusely* Hey :) dramione_girl82 here from the common room...

This story is a lot of fun to read! It starts off slightly sad, with the way her mother treated her once she found out about her gift and her father becoming a drunk because of her mother's ignorance. Outside of those two little factors of horror, it seems she is managing nicely.

I have to say lol It would have been so weird to know who my best friends were going to be before I had even met them >.< Actually, lol If I had known my best friends were going to be my best friends... I would have ran for the hills screaming! Nah, just kidding lol..

Ahahaha that is hilarious! Flies... Of all the insects available... they chose flies! I have to say it cracked me up as I imagined the scene playing out in my mind... Way to funny!! Great Job!!

Ok... SO... this is the part of all my reviews I am glad is last. Your grammar is really good, with only a few minimal errors here and there... For Example: "Life had turned out pretty normal for me and I was actually lives a normal life." I think what you meant to say was: "Life had turned out pretty normal for me and I was actually living a normal life." Just little things like this... Nothing major, so please don't throw tomatoes at me!! XD I'm not up to date of the Next Generation *Hangs head in shame* so I can't tell you really how your characterization is... I sowee!!

All in all this is a fantastic story, one you should share with everyone you can! I had a great time reading this lol and I even read it to my sister who had just as much fun with it as I did. You have combined the happy and sad realism of life, and for that I give you. *Two Thumbs Up* 10/10 Easily!!

Author's Response: You just made my day! I wasn't having that good of a day and I read this and now I couldn't be happier!
I'm glad you liked it! And that you even read it to your sister! That's so AWESOME! I wish I could make you a batch of cookies!
I'll be sure to fix those mistakes!
Again just thank you a million times for this review! :)


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