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Review:MajiKat says:
i wrote a review for this and it disappeared...annoying
anyway, here to review as requested!

i thought this was really nice - i felt strangely at peace after reading it. it was lovely and heartfelt and although the symbolism is there, it is not in your face. i don't feel like i am being forced to feel something/see something a certain way, which often happens with fic full of symbolism, so well done.

i liked the dream - it was a nice opening but i got a little confused - was Luna in bed? Before she had returned to bed. that implies she is, but then, she is by the lake and being found by professor mcgonagall.

other than that i thought this was very luna-ish, and her conversation with the professor at the end was great - both were in character and luna was serene and like she should be.

nice work!
xx

Author's Response: I deliberately left the first part confusing. I wanted the reader to decide some if Luna was dreaming the entire thing, sleepwalking, or just sleeping by the lake. (My personal preference is that she went to bed as normal, and sleepwalked there, but the reader can decide that for himself or herself).

I'm glad the symbolism isn't too in your face and that it gave the feeling of peace that I wanted it to convey.

Thanks again for the review. I'm especially glad that you think I had Luna's characterization right, as I think she's the trickiest character to write well.


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