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Review:orangezauber says:
I just read through all of your chapters and I must say that this is quite a brilliant plot. It is an original idea (at least I haven't seen one quite like it) and it really has this great flow to it. The way you write Willow is fantastic. I feel as though I can feel all of her emotions with her, but I can also feel how the Marauders, Lily, and Alice are feeling.

I especially like how you split up the weeks. And the fact that every one is giving something to Willow to help her break out of her shell seems much more plausable than say just Sirius (since he is the love interest in this story). Because it is true, everyone has a secrect or deepness to them that is only visable by getting to know the person. Again you did a fantastic job writing all of this out. The flow of your writing is beautiful and I look forward to reading more of your story.

Until next time,
Always,
orangezauber

Author's Response: Hello! :)
I'm really glad you consider this an original idea because lets face it, there are hundreds of Marauder era fics out there and I was a little afraid of being thrown into the general category with them!
I love writing Willow and I'm glad that you enjoy her charcter; sometimes I have to remind myself that I have other characters who need attention too!
And yup this may be a Sirius/OC fic at the end of the day but I don't intend to merely focus on that. I'd rather say this is an OC/Sirius fic because she is my main character and that is where I want the attention.
Thank you so much for saying that about my writing and I'm so happy to have new reviewers! Thanks again! :)
- Ruth xx


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