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Review:blueirony says:
I can sort of relate to this as my nose is perpetually itchy, it drives me insane. And there really is no discreet way to itch it. Rubbing it from the outside does absolutely nothing.

Poor Lucy! You really captured her character beautifully in this. I love how the smallest of problems seem monumental to her. How she thinks that her parents will kill her and she will have to leave Hogwarts. That is so cute! I really got that childish innocence from her in this and I was laughing in some places, not because I was laughing at her or anything, I just thought that parts of this were so cute!

I don't know if you know any people around her age in this, but you must, because you got her character so right, it's insane.

I don't know what else to say! You took such a simply idea and made it something so cute and something really special. And, on such a small idea, you managed to really capture a character's feelings and emotions.

It was brilliant. And a wonderful entry for the challenge, hope you enjoyed it!

Joop :]

Author's Response: I thought that this was a story that everyone could relate to, because I don't think there is a single person who hasn't been in that situation.

I'm glad that you liked Lucy's character, eleven year olds are still pretty immature, and seeing the way she was raised I could see her being worried about everything. And I worked with 11 year olds at camp, so I do know a bunch of kids her age.

I'm really glad that you liked it though! Thanks for the review!

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