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Review:niks_560 says:
I totally agree with you about the length of the chapters. Quality over quantity.

Anyway, this chapter was brilliant. It really was great. I loved James, and that seemed to fit him perfectly. I loved that he got her to laugh and when he did, he wasn't shocked like the others, as though they have been hanging out all the time and they have a laugh all the time as well.

Peter was a shocker. I quite liked him. You gave him depth, which most people, when they write him, usually lack. I like how you made him good, with the slight hinting of his future misdeeds. But also made it not too obvious. And also you made him quite smart. Again, most people just write him as a stupid character (which I doubt he was. I see him more as average compared to the other 3). So, overall, I liked his depth. A nice and very unexpected surprise :)

I love how Willow is now opening up as well as becoming noticed by other as well. It's like we're watching her slowly, but surely, come to life.

I can't wait for the next one. Sirius' week! I loved his reference to her name being fitting of her person. Aww, that was lovely. Not soppy but clearly significant.

I am falling in love with story even more. It is so different and yet so captivating.

X

Author's Response: Yes!! I'm so glad you liked it! James and Sirius' chapters were actually the very first ones I wrote so when I finally got here I considered changing it a bit but I'm glad I didn't :)

Peter's bit was a shock to me too! I have a real problem with Peter as a character - and I've talked about this in the forums, but I find it so hard to see past his betrayal and think about the person he must have been to have inspired the trust in the first place. I think I've finally managed to find my Peter now but its gonna be a little dodgy characterisation for a bit maybe until I fully figure him out. But I'm determined to not just leave him out and pretend like he wasn't around.

Yea it took us a while but Willow's coming through! I'm slightly scared that everyone's waiting for Sirius. His bit was my very first bit of writing so I really hope it doesn't disappoint!! I hope to hear from you then too :) Thanks for yet another lovely review!
- Ruth xx


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