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Review:hushpuppy says:
Great choice of song, it's one of my favorites.

Interesting chapter where lots happened to move the plot along, which is fabulous.

While I'm glad the Evil One is gone, I would have liked to see Albus actually make a decision to break up with her. Hopefully you have a believable explanation for her moving and it's not just 'cause so that she's out of the way. Right now it seems like an out of character thing for her parents to do since they were excited that she was dating Albus, if I remember correctly. I could be thinking of another story though.

It's a bummer that McGonagall actually wanted Adia as the prefect. Although it might be because she had the confidence to do the job, it's always disappointing in real life when authority figures don't seen people for who they are and instead think they are darling... It's wonderful that Professor Walker has been watching out for Grace all this time. What he had to say was a little sad but heartening at the same time.

Can't wait for Al to figure out that he likes Grace, for her to own her power and for Willow to heal. Oh, and for Lily to get better enough that she doesn't want to fool around with guys like Jack. Grace is right, she can do so much better.

Thank you so much for the new chapter!

Author's Response: Holy cow this is a long review :)

The "Evil One", or as I like to think of her, "She-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named" isn't quite as out of the picture as you might think. Then again, she is evil, so don't be so surprised by this fact. There is so much more I wish I could say, but then I would be giving away basically the entirety of Chapter 24, and where's the fun in that? As for her parents, they are rather...interesting people. I left them ambiguous until now. Also, as you will find out when I get to actually putting my thoughts down on to paper, there is actually several reasons for her moving to France, and not just because she is an evil toad.

I will add that you hit the nail on the head with my reasoning for Grace being passed over for prefect. As for the rest of your review, I will have to admit that I will probably have several very shocked and angry reviewers in the
future, Al is really quite clueless when it comes to Grace. For the fashion fiends, aka Lily and Willow, well let's just say that it isn't only boys who can be stupid about relationships.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I have no way of knowing whether you or anyone else looks to see if I respond to people when they leave me reviews, but it really does make my day. I promise that I will get these chapters out as fast as my life allows me to. Fortunately I already have the rest of Finding Grace mapped out in my mind and how I want it to end. Now I just need to get writing.


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