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Review:WhatAboutRegulus says:
Another review :),

Alright I don't think I saw any mistakes in this chapter, just that you should add more description. I don't know why, but it is missing something hmmm. It is very good though, but also short :P Why not make it longer! Get more stuff in there!!

I think that the characters are really good so far. Victoria seems nice and just a typical lover and Regulus seems like the awesomely amazing Regulus we all want to know and love :)

The flow was pretty good, just more description would be nice and longer chapters might help the flow if you are looking to improve it!

Sorry I saw you answered my other review and this one is kind of late. . . Whoops! Don't want to get into that story!

Great Job!!

WhatAboutRegulus

Author's Response: Ha, Welcome back.

Yeah, I was having a bit of trouble with this chapter so I might add a bit of the next chapter onto the end to make it longer.

Well thank you, They are both sort of innocent at the moment and they'll start to develop in the next few chapters.

The next few chapters are becoming more and more action filled.

That's alright, You reviewed and that's all that matters really.

Thank you!

x Ely

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