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Review:WhatAboutRegulus says:
Hiya MidnightBlue_x review time finally!

First. . .

tall figure standing by the tall lamp her grandmother had gave(n) her.

The figure seemed to be male, (it) was facing the opposite to direction to Victoria.(he, you already identified him as a boy, so it shouldn't be an it!! :P)

I really like this story a lot. I think it is very orignal and a lot of people forget Regulus. As you can tell I love Regulus :). I think that you can use more description in some parts of the first paragraph and possibly if it got to long cut it into more than one paragraph. Don't want it to long! I like how Regulus is a romantic, I love those kinds of stories. . . HOPLESS ROMANTIC :D.

Overall I thought it was really well written. Wicked good. Just the description needs some work, add more :)



Author's Response: Hey,

Thanks for pointing those out for me. I also love Regulus and I hate it when people forget about him too. *dabs eyes* He's a great character. Yes, I should add a bit more in. Thank you so much for reviewing!

x Ely

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