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Review:elegantphoenix says:
"I can't breathe without you." TAYLOR SWIFT REFERENCE?! I think so :) And I think I saw Breathless somewhere too, but I can't remember where. Did you intend to do that? Just thought I'd point that out because it was cool how it seemed to fit into the chapter. Also, I still don't fully understand why Dom was running around the school "trying to forget". That didn't really make sense to me, but overall, I loved the chapter! I'm glad that Apollo's back and everyone is back on (sort of) good terms. Even Artemis and James :3 YAY! *throws confetti* And thank goodness Dom and Apollo will not be naming their child Thor. Haha. That would be so interesting to see, though. I will admit, I did do a bit of hand-flourishing when I said it, too. It just seemed like a good idea at the time... :P

I can't really say that I have a favorite quote.. maybe the bit where their teacher yelled at Fred and he hadn't even said anything yet? That made me laugh. Oh! And the little exchange between Apollo and James when Apollo kissed the back of Dom's hand. Hahaha. Very nice. But why would James be sensitive to all the PDA? Isn't he still with Sarah? I feel like I'm missing something important :/

Awesome chapter! Can't wait to find out what the baby's name's going to be and how this partnership between James and Artemis goes (hopefully really well!!!). 10/10

Nadhira

Author's Response: hii! dude, you left like major reviews, which is totally awesome. what sucks is that school is trying to eat me so i can only respond to this one. i'm trying my bestest to respond, i really am.
but keep leaving those reviews. i read all of them. like, ALL of them. they make me happy.
onwards!
dom thing - i run when i want to take a break/forget stuff. i guess that's what she was doing...sorry if it was a little vague, haha :)

and james doesnt like PDA between his cousin and his best friend, that's all :)

thanks so much!!


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