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Review:dianap00 says:
Molly is a very sweet, very funny, and rather nutty sort of girl. I like how awkward the whole dinner was. And how Teddy was so nonchalant until he suddenly - very much - was not. It was funny sort of, but not in an explicitly hilarious way, you see. I liked it very much but to be honest, I may have prefered the 'realistic end' because I don't see how Teddy would have reacted to Molly jumping him... because her jumping him is rather abrupt. I'd really like to know what Teddy's take on all this was.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's fantastic that you enjoyed Molly's adventurous date with Teddy - it was supposed to be subtly humourous, like they were acting out the motions of "the date", but couldn't keep their masks on straight.

It would be interesting to try this story from Teddy's point of view, just to see how he would be reacting to Molly's actions throughout - perhaps she is the reason why he stops being nonchalant. She's too sweet and nutty. XD


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