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Review:SeverusLove says:
Dear Elly,

Here are some grammar mistakes I found:

deciding to walk home.She grabbed her brand --you forgot the space between . and She

"Carried you her of course, with my strong muscles" --changer "her" to "here"

Elly, I lurve the picture. The background was sooo...innocent! XD

Anyway, I think Draco is OOC here though, he isn't that playful but, oh well. Emiliya is not OOC because, well, she's your character so you could shape her any way you want. I'm guessing this is a romance fic? Aside, from the mistakes I mentioned earlier, there's nothing else. So basically, it's great. ^^

Anyway,
Keep it Up to Improve,
Loff you Elly!!!
xoxo Sevvy

Author's Response: Heyo Sevvy!

Oooh, Thank you for pointing those out Sevvy. socal @ TDA made the amazing picture, it's so pretty right? Further into the fic he's going to change into the dark Draco but for now he's sort of ooc. Yes it is, or it will be. Woo! Thank you Sevvy.

I loff you too.

x Ely

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