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Review:Cal585 says:
A good start you have here. As has been said, maybe a little more background and pace it out a little. It does feel a little rushed (such as getting to the headquarters). But your character interactions are great. I really enjoyed the speech between characters and found myself grinning widely at your portrayal of Fred and George.
Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad the portrayal of Fred and George is good, that's one of the things I was worried about getting right. And yes, I know the background is a little sparse, I didn't want to dump everything about the character in the first couple of chapters, it's spread out quite a bit. But good point, I'll look at revising sometime.

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