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Review:SeverusLove says:
Dear Ginny45,

I would like to point out a grammar mistake: "They had all be hurt more than normal that night" I think it's "They had all been hurt more than normal that night".

But other than that, the story was really good, and so was the plot. But it was a bit rushed. And I bet Lily won't let it go that easily. But that could be excused for her sleepiness though. So besides that, everything is good and you should keep it up to improve!

Thanks for requesting,
xoxo SeverusLove

Author's Response: Hi thank you for the review. :)
I will sort that soon I have a few other things I have to change as well.
I am going to add more in, I just wanted to get it up before the queue closure maybe I'll add the morning after in.
Thank You Ginny45/RandomRed xxx

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