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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Oh goodness, this chapter ended on quite the cliffhanger. That's actually the only thing I disliked about it, but it wouldn't be a cliffhanger if people actually liked being left hanging, now would it? :P

Anyway, I really enjoyed the more in-depth characterisation that you provided on Crane as I can see now how he really feels about Freddy and what his intentions are more clearly than before. I actually feel bad for him because Freddy doesn't feel the same way about him that he does her... or does she? I guess that's your own little secret to surprise us readers with. Over all, I really enjoyed this chapter and feel free to come back and request the next 3 chapters when you have them posted. :) 10/10

Author's Response: Hello Leslie!
Ah, sorry for the cliffie! I know, I know, I'm quite guilty of leaving most of my chapters unresolved. It's a bad habit, I guess. One time, a reviewer even called me the queen of cliffhangers, haha.

Thank you so much for the kind feedback! You know I really do love your reviews. ^_^ I'm so happy that you liked this chapter. Usually, I'm very lukewarm about my writing, but I have to be honest and admit that this chapter is probably my favorite. Also, I'm thrilled to hear that you were able to get a better idea of Crane's motives and personality. So far, I know he has been very furtive.

Again, thanks for everything! I will definitely re-request when I have new chapters posted. Until then, take care and be well!

Lee Anne

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