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Review:OrdinarilyExtraordinary says:
Aww. I'm sadish. James is annoyed at G, which I guess is a little confusing for me. But I cannot say I was dissapointed, because I never really am. I'm just reallly confused on the whole elite thing. I think I might be the only person too. G gave the crown thing to Zoe so she would fail and bring the Elite down, correct? And Josh and James are upset...why?
OH, I want to mention this before i forget too xD James gets annoyed at G because she's meanish/cruel/etc. James in Wolfsbane does the same with Charisma xD ! Just thought to point that out. I found that very cutesy. Bwaha.
Anyways, the whole Kellan/Kevin/Damon thing is confusing for me. I though Kevin was G's brother? Or something. Maybe it's because I have the memory of a fish. I'm sorry i'm slow..and hopefully you'll help me out. :X
Cheers,
Dana

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review Dana. I'm so glad that you're enjoying it still! :D
James and Georgie are having a bit of a falling out. They're just being themselves. I can't write a story without many arguments it seems.
Josh and James are upset at the way that Georgie treated Zoe, yes she may be mean but if I saw one of my friends treat someone in that way that Georgie treated Zoe then I would be kinda annoyed at them (But that could just be me being weird :P)
I didn't mean to make it similar to Wolfsbane :P but it seems that I can't help it. I hadn't noticed :D Gosh I'm silly.
I shouldn't have given them similar names :P Basically, Kellan is Georgie's brother but he became a Death Eater and made sure that Georgie got away from France safely. Kevin was her best friend who had a bit of a crush on her. Damon was her brothers best friend who swore that he would keep her safe - and so he has done. But they are all Death Eaters :) I hope that clears it up a little.
Thank you again for the review! I hope that you enjoy the rest of the story!

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