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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Hi Lee Anne, I'm so sorry it's taken me this long to review but I made it eventually. Now, to get to the review. I really liked this chapter, mainly for the intensity of the descriptive tones you used to describe death and how the orderlies and Dr. Crane hid it from the patients. I also found the interaction in the first section between Dr. Crane and Freddy to be intriguing to say the very least. It seems like there's something there, but I'm not sure if it's romance or something else that will come out in the open later on in the story. Over all, great chapter and keep up the excellent writing with keeping readers guessing and looking for more answers in the context of the passages. :D 10/10 I'll be back later this evening after I get off from work to review ch. 7 & 8.

Author's Response: Hello Leslie!
Thank you so much for the thoughtful review! It was wonderful hearing from you. And please do not apologize for the delay. I completely understand. RL is much more important than any silly old fanfic anyway. ;)

I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. Yes, I always thought that the culture of death and dying in TB sanatoriums was odd. Today, hospitals and medical professionals are all about full disclosure and such. I suppose, back then when TB was rampant, they wanted to avoid panic.

And yes, there is definitely something going on between Crane and Freddy, though I dare not tell you now for fear of ruining the rest of the fic. ;)

Again, thanks so much for the lovely feedback! I hope you have a great weekend. Take care and be well!


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